Cleansing- An Original Poem

Posted by admin on Friday 10 July 2009

quite an old somewhat humorous poem.

Cleansing

They say that ugly things
Are beautiful when you take another look at them.
Standing here
Beside your putrid bed,
I realize
That this ugly,
Repulsive moment in time
Is just beauty in disguise,
And the work of elegance
At its best.
I feel in me
This sense of beautiful cleansing.
Cleansing of all the
Muck of the world
That has clouded my mind
And my heart
And sucked the breath out of my lungs
Like a parasite.
This is truly an
August
Occasion, my friend.
The elimination,
The eradication,
The cleansing
Of the parasite that is you.

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6 Responses to “Cleansing- An Original Poem”

  1. MkbDecat
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    nice :)
    nice :)

  2. MsWriteNow
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    5* / fav
    5* / fav

  3. koryargonic
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    Thank you! I am …
    Thank you! I am glad you like it.

  4. janeczka
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    You’re bloody good! …
    You’re bloody good!! and so young as well. Keep it up!!

  5. ellyunfortunetly
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    You’ve gotten …
    You’ve gotten better reading them out me thinks – 5 stars

  6. 1imageofme
    Friday 10 July 2009 6:05 am

    this felt like a …
    this felt like a kind of
    i was looking in the mirror when i wrote this,
    type of poem.
    if so. accept the ugliness.
    maybe therein lies the key to a true cleansing
    apologies if my interpretatin is way of.
    either way, great poem. 5*

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